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Post by Sirius Fri Mar 08, 2013 2:37 pm

Name: Dark Barrier

Element(s): Darkness, Space

Cost: 10 Mp

Description: A translucent dark sphere surrounds the user (and it's host if in Guardian Mode), just a half a foot away from them in all direction for a single post.

Effect: This sphere can block 1 moderate physical attack before fading away. Anything that hits this sphere is treated as if hitting a rock.


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Post by Ire Fri Mar 08, 2013 4:14 pm

Why do you have two separate descriptions for the same spell? Remove the redundancy.

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Post by Sirius Fri Mar 08, 2013 7:25 pm

Edited.
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Post by Ire Fri Mar 08, 2013 8:33 pm

Approved.

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